Photographer: Douglas Park
Club: Eastwood Photographic Society
Canadian Points: 12
Scottish Points: 14
Canadian Comments:
You're in close for drama & character. Good! But something else is needed. I'm missing seeing his eyes. Or what it is his eyes are seeing. When you're in this tight, details count a great deal.
Scottish Comments:
Great character here, I like the angle of the head. The yellow on the left is a little distracting; ideally moving round to avoid this would strengthen the shot. For me, for this type of shot, I would like to have seen it sharper t really bring out all the textures in the beard, moustache & hair.
